Recount writing

WALT: write a recount


Success criteria:

  1. The first paragraph says where, when, who, why and how.
  2. The events are in order.
  3. I will use time words (first, then, finally, etc.).
  4. My recount is written in the past tense.
  5. Details are added to make my writing interesting. Adding adjectives (no went!)
  6. I finish my writing by saying how I felt

A very well written recount Matthew, all your events are in order, you have your time words and you added detail. Next step - work on sounding the words to predict how they might be spelt.

Bronze CARE certificate

Congratulations to Matthew for receiving a bronze CARE certificate.  You have been a great role model for other students and you represent Oaklands and its CARE values perfectly!!  Keep it up.